Reviews for Silence
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
WOW!
This is perfect. Unbearably brilliant!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I can relate to this which is sad because when you do something for someone which is thrown back in your face, you help but feel a kin to the speaker. I like the fact that you shape this Poe with such eloquent emotion and flow that I'm in awe of you. This is a great piece, which I hope you're immensely proud of! I did notice a slight error "but that I know you're not" I just think 'that' throws of the flow of the poem - in my opinion. But that's an insignificant detail to a great piece, as always your writing is superb!
tolerate chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
It's the type of thing that when you do something for someone you're devoted to and they can't believe it because it's almost wrong, isn't it? It's for them that you do it, but if they knew, they'd be devastated and leave you. I liked the simple emotions here, especially the last three lines of the second last stanza. Great writing! Keep up the good work.