Reviews for I set my sights
ThinkPi chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
This was a peculiar poem for me. I figured the essence of this poem is falling in love, something the speaker could not control. There isn't much to it but it was a solid poem. However, the last two lines threw me off. Maybe it's the way I interpret it but "When I set my sights" it suddenly felt the speaker intentionally "set their sights on" the person in question. The two previous instances described the feeling of eyes wandering around and unintentionally meeting the person's eyes, but the ninth line vaguely feels that the person physically set their sights on the person.

I swear it's the way I interpret, I think have a strange mind. Straightforward poem nonetheless, nice job FeatheryFlow. :)
SomeFuckingGirl chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Ah, sometimes that happens, eh? Good job!
Naver chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Sweet, it really is. This is about love at first sight, right? :)
KaylaHeart chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
"Inevitably, I was going to fall in love with you." Homecoming weekend, 2012. Exactly how it went, really. Great poem, I love it!