Reviews for Death is Life
BeccaDd chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Just because someone writes about cutting...doesnt mean they are encouraging it. To talk about it takes courage. You say it as if everyone who calls this poem beautiful is a cutter and a sicko. WE arnt. it is beautifully written. You can feel the pain in this story. Im not saying why this was written. But i usually write insted of cut now.i almost had a friend who commited suicide. But she started writing now. And shes so far had no relapses. Dont talk about what you dont know Jessekah or w/e. This is a beautifully written poem.
Jesskah chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
How can people call a poem beautiful when its about someone cutting themselves. I read the poem i read what people reviewed. You say ure cutters and u say it so lightly like its kool. There was only one review that actually didnt sound like it. Yeh well you think its kool, you wait till your on the other side and someone close to you ends up killing themself.

As for this poem, I am no person to say poems are rubbish or crap, but i think you need to look further into this subject before you can go and write about it like that. When people cut themselves they don't lovingly do it. and as for stroking the blade that just doesnt make sense. And as for putting the band around her thigh thats just stupid. When people cut themselves they do it because of all the reasons that make them depressed and lonely and also because they are scared and also have a fear. Ok I am going to stop rambling on now. I just think this subject shouldnt be taken so lightly. And everyone would think the same thing once they've had someone close to them die because they've cut themself to deep one night or they have killed themself
confwuzzled chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
wow...(that's a VERY good wow)
PM20 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Nicely done, encompassing such a theme with such a beautiful flow.
Michelle.Walking.Contradiction chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Haunting, beatiful. So full of emotion, I can feel and see the girl in your poem. I can feel her pain, her need to feel. The imagery is so vivid and is so clear in my mind. Wonderful job.
Darlingdeath chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
good job, i'm tryin to quit cutting. It reflects the sort of odd painlessness of the cuts. But i dunno, what about fear? I don't know, am I the only one thats afraid 'cause no matter how hard I try I can't stop myself from taking up the blade...
SuicideChild chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
Beautiful. Very detailed. I cut too.
Keahirada chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
wow i was a cutter ive stopped(i have lae dont deny it) ok i did one a few days ago but ive only done a few and i can totally relate to this exept i only make a few
Unheard-Screams chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
some of it was very much what sum1 who does that would do. good job.
read my poems? they are about the same thing.
Paris777 chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
wow that is how i feel strong and yet to the point. I hope to be seeing more of your poems. I hope you will R/R some of mine!
Broken Wishes chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
Oh, wow. The imagery in this, it's amazing. Damn. Good job.
Rachel2 chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
That was amazing. I really appreciated and understood it perfectly. I can really relate to this poem,thank you for expressing it in such a beautifully sad way. Good work.
DXM Junkie chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Your poems really are very good.
Welbutrin Junkie chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Amazing poem. It's very poweful, especally because it hits so close to home. It's written with so much insite, unlike some other writers.
Approaching Autumn chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
I absolutely love it. As a cutter I can truely relate. I have one question though: Why exactly did you make the wiccan refferance? Are you wiccan by chance?

I'm definately putting this on my favorite stories list

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