Reviews for Metamorphosis
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This one's interesting, it has a folky sounding flow to it, and has the general hopeful tone, but doesn't sound as aged somehow. I can't even describe it. Thanks for the shoutout as well, by the way!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Oh. My. God. This is the most beautiful, emotional poetic thing I've ever read, not to mention original. I don't like...nope not one bit...because I LOVE IT! The rhyme, imagery, flow and just every single word was flawless. I love it. This has left me speechless and I honestly don't think I deserve to have such a great poem partially dedicated to me. This is awesome poem. Definitely going to favourite it.
tolerate chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I absolutely loved the rhyme and the kids' rhyme. I think this poem is one of the best I've ever read from your poems, mainly because of the really good rhythm and the flow. Third stanza from the last was really great, especially the line [And we're writing a will our pen]. All in all, it's really good!