Reviews for Origin
rust phoenix chapter 15 . 2/16/2014
very beautiful and evocative.
I'm just a person now read 66 chapter 10 . 1/30/2014
True true
I'm just a person now read 66 chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
hahaha
rust phoenix chapter 14 . 1/21/2014
your haiku make me want to write more.
rust phoenix chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
i feel similarly.
have you heard sara lov's cover of My Body Is A Cage?
rust phoenix chapter 9 . 1/21/2014
perfect
rust phoenix chapter 5 . 1/21/2014
you do really cool and new things with haiku. very expressive, you evoke powerful moods very efficiently.
rust phoenix chapter 2 . 1/21/2014
love this.
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
aa i know this feeling. you describe it perfectly.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/21/2013
I particularly liked 'Long Jeans'.
Keep at it!
TheGlycoprotein chapter 11 . 2/8/2013
This is incredibly powerful despite it's shortness (although, this being a collection of haikus, I guess the length is irrelevant!) Love it!
True Talker chapter 10 . 2/2/2013
This makes me think.
True Talker chapter 9 . 1/30/2013
You are NOT cold of this I am CERTAIN. Why? Because I feel better when I am on here. REALLY.
True Talker chapter 8 . 1/30/2013
Reading wedding dress makes me happy. Reading the last three words makes me sad. REALLY. It just does. REALLY.
True Talker chapter 7 . 1/30/2013
This makes me think too.
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