Reviews for Scorpio And Sagittarius
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
ouch. I love the repetition in this piece. I feel the small town angst here and the loss of what you thought you had. Beautiful flow.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
This is sad and unfortunately, for me anyway, relatable. It's sad that people do that and when you look back they are still stuck in the same vicious circle while you've moved on. I did like the Nowhere idea because it suggests that they've gone 'nowhere' while you've gone 'somewhere'. I'm babbling! But I really enjoyed this piece, it's relatable and emotional - which is what I love about your pieces. Did I mention I liked your imagery and title? Because they clever, ingenious and original - much like you! :D
tolerate chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
I feel you. I felt like this before too, and it's a terrible feeling. Great poem as always, and if this is your true feelings written down here, then I really hope you'll get well soon, emotionally. Keep up the good work!