Reviews for Figuring out Foster |
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![]() ![]() 10 years later and i come back to read this like im in middle school again lmaooo XD |
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![]() ![]() Ok, I have been enjoying the story. It is a very emotional one, although it seems the emotions are muted; not expressed very strongly. My imagination is supplying a lot of the angst that isn't written. There is one particular thing that is bugging me, though, and even though I have seen it in other stories recently, unfortunately you will bear the brunt of my frustration. Throughout this whole story so far you have used the word "conscious" in the context where you should have used the word "conscience". Then in this chapter you did the exact opposite; using conscience when it should have been conscience. You have also used the word "enviable" when it should have been "inevitable". *sigh* Here are some quick definitions of those words: Conscience- that little thing inside you that tells you right from wrong. Conscious- being awake and aware. Inevitable- something you believe will happen no matter how hard you try to change it. Enviable- something that you envy. So, if you are ever to polish this story up. Please keep these in mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved ur story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a wonderful book! Thanks for writing it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Thanks for putting yourself out there and uploading this- it definitely made me smile! Good luck with your future writing adventures : ) |
![]() ![]() Guess who?! :D Vincentviolence. These people have some emotional issue directly their family! That's pretty sensible since no one is a jerk for no reason. Miss ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Love it! Kind of wish it didn't have to end... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story SO MUCH! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one of the best realistic stories I have read. Thanks for the experience! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, I can't believe its over with already. This was a wonderful read far outside of my usual genres. Best of luck with publishing! :) |
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