|Reviews for Sequoia|
| bleached by ink chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Wow, this is a very emotional and passionate poem. It reads more like a song than a poem to me, though. The style is unique and unlike what I've seen before. If anything, I would advise you to work on clarity - some parts of the poem were confusing and I didn't understand them. My favourite line is the third one, "rage, rage against the machine with me, we aren't popular but we aren't nothing, we ain't pretties but you certainly weren't an ugly". I like the repetition of the word 'rage' and the meaning behind it too. All in all it's a good poem, very powerful and passionate.