|Reviews for Susan's Story|
| Breaking Sad chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Wow this sounds like the beginning to an interesting story. Though a word of advice: you might want to draw out the action, so it doesn't sound as rushed. :D
| RSE13 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Really impressive opening. You've managed to make Susan a really sympathetic character without ruining her mystery. I want to read more already!