|Reviews for Framed|
| xslothyx112 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
:) :) Keep writing! :p
| Jun Li Kanashii chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I like the thought of this, but can I point out a few mistakes?
The way that the guy would've found out he had been framed was not from the news. He would have been arrested first, then probably the situation would be explained to him later.
Try not to use 'and then' too much, it weakens the story. I suggest using longer sentences but with more detail.
I suggest you rewrite it, and then continue. Please consult me if you need more help!