|Reviews for Perfection Cannot Speak Or See|
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I loved the tone of this piece. Beautiful and sad...lonely. I loved it!
| True Talker chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
If it matters I would keep any secret that you chose to share. Also, I would like to be by your side. For you to not feel alone. Seriously. Why? Because I DO CARE REALLY.
| The Night has a Thousand eyes chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
This is a gorgeous poem, i love how you've worked in the rain.
And yet it's very depressing as you can tell at the beginning of the poem, someone close has betrayed them and revealed they their secrets (this has happened to me before, i think it has happened to everyone at least once) to the rain meaning they they have no one/don't trust anyone now...
Overall I loved it!
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
This is such a beautiful piece and I really like the rain personification. I can relate to the first part when you trust someone and confide them only to have them stab you in the back with it. It's awful. I do love how your poems can be beautiful, emotional yet so relatable and blunt. As for the second stanza, so beautiful. What more can I say? It's just so clever and ingenious. Not to mention thought provoking. Brilliant piece!