Reviews for Spotlight
ygg chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Wow the use of bumblebees in this context is just wonderful! "pollinating the flowers that sway towards me".. Really wonderful imagery! Love the way you placed the text too.. it enhances the feeling of the poem. Excellent work I must say!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I love this. Very clever, original and beautiful. I loved the layout very unique and not to mention brilliant. I loved the imagery and flow and just the whole concept. I didn't focus on the grammatical errors you said because I was captured by this 'performance'. But I did notice a tiny spelling error: "bumblebees fit from person to person" I think you meant flit instead of fit. But that's paled in comparison to how good a piece this is. Brilliant as always!
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
This makes me think. It just does.
The Night has a Thousand eyes chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I like it,
your layout style is unique XD