|Reviews for Times of Summer|
| ADD1CTED chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
I wasn't expecting Lyla to be his girlfriend. I thought she was just a friend.
| Nintendo Fan 101 chapter 2 . 2/3/2013
His best friend from childhood died and he's afraid to tell his current girlfriend that she died. Interesting story you have started here, but please continue the story and I will be very happy!
| ADD1CTED chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Does Zach have OCD? Reading him point out that he was "7 minutes and 3 seconds late" made me think he is. Not that I don't mind, I can become 'OCD-ic' from time to time. Since you don't mind some constructive criticism, I'l point out some minor mistakes that I noticed:
1. "Why why why?" - either a comma or a question mark should be there.
2. "What do you do for a living Mr. Smith?" - needs a comma between 'living' and 'Mr. Smith'.
3. "Zach, zach please pick up your phone" - you forgot to capitalize the second 'Zach'.
Again these mistakes are just minor and doesn't disrupt the story's flow.
I'm guessing that Zach used to drink but has been sober for some time now, right? I wonder if Andrea has anything to do with it.