|Reviews for Not My Son|
| DawnSister chapter 5 . 1/25/2013
I feel Levi's absolute frustration in this chapter but, as a parent, I see sympathise with Howard, especially as he has already seen the devastation caused by an abusive relationship. I would want to wrap my son in cotton wool if I had seen him beaten up by his partner. So I guess what I'm saying is that Levi's frustration is nothing next to the frustration of a parent trying to protect their child and having to accept that they have to eventually step back, if not let go, because however old the child is they are still the child and the instinct to protect never goes away.
| Skyless11 chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Awwwww that's so cuuuuteeeeee the "over-protective" dadddddd. xD I love howard more and more :P And poor levi QQ wish he'd find someone good for him...
| GrayFullbusterfangirl chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
I understand what Levi is feeling. My brothers are too protective of me. Even though I don't even plan to get in a relation with any guy soon!
Nice chapter. Update soon! .
| Janie chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Wow, from one extreme to the next. I loved it.
| Astir-Lewis chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
I. Love. This. SOOOOOOOOO MUCH! Mainly because my dad is doing the same thing right now, specifically this part. And I think the only reason he likes this last one is because he's actually a really good guy. But yeah, it's amazing. Sad that Levi had to get beat, but it made me happy to see that his dad accepted him. Anyway, great as always :)
| Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Oh god, I don't know what's worse' Howard not supporting Levi or Howard Supporting Levi. Both seem pretty bad at the moment... but he'll learn I suppose...
| Demon.beneath.the.yaoi2 chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
I wuved it! I am very happy about how the story turned out.
| Honunjama chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Aw this chapter was really touching. I think you've done a good job portraying Howard as a man who loves his son and yet is struggling with these deep seated homophobic beliefs. It's satisfying to see him starting to accept Levi being gay.
| Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
This chapter made me shed a few tears. I'm glad Howard finally... admitted to himself that Levi is gay. Baby steps I suppose. I hope the next boyfriend isn't as bad as this one was.
| S.H. Marr chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
Is this finished? It seems finished. But maybe there will be an epilogue.
And yeah, I guess it makes sense.
| DawnSister chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
This felt like an ending. It certainly felt like it from Howard's point of view, but of course he has to be given the opportunity to make good on his new found acceptance and he has some bridges to build with Levi.
Some father son bonding is in order I think. Although presumably it won't be over football and porn ;}
| Skyless11 chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
Hmmm that was faster than I expected it to happen, but somehow it's reasonable.
First off, naaaaah. The wife is way to simple for her to have more of a personality than the husband. He's more complex. She's flat: how she was at the beginning that's how she'll end - unless you prove me wrong? but I doubt you'll make her the bad guy xD unless you turn Howard gay which will be incredibly funny xD Whereas Howard changes. that makes him a complex character :D he has doubts. He has various sides. That gives him a lot more personality than his wife.
Second off oowmegodh that was so cuteeee! I loved this chapter. Really did. Did not expect it to come so quickly (the change of heart) but I really liked it.
Well then. Till next chapter xD
| Janie chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
OMG I hate that it took my poor sweet little innocent Levi getting the shit beat out of him for Howard to finally wake up, but thank god that he finally did. And I loved that Howard beat the crap out of Brad. Great chapter!
| Janie chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
Aw, poor Levi. I so wish things would have worked out between him and Sam. I was really hoping for a scene with sex just to make Howard uncomfortable, lol. Bring on chapter 3! :)
| Skyless11 chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
As I thought : I really like howard xD Probably his stubbornness :) I like stubborn people :D And maybe the weird way his mind works xD and how he keeps on believing his son isn't gay xD yep. I like howard probably even more than his son. He's got personality. Even more than his wife xD And you're doing great at building him! Great job on this chapter :