Reviews for Fractured Wings
True Talker chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
This had me think.
tashaj4de chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Despite its "wings" being broken, It continues to hope... very strong will, I guess. It wishes to fly, despite its broken wings. Perhaps someday, those wings may heal, and it will fly once again, its wish granted. It is but a slim hope, but it was something to hold onto, to console itself...

Ahaha, sorry for the formal stuff xD

As usual you make really good poems xD How do you do it- xD

Ah, but now that I'm here, I might as well read what else you uploaded xD
Jalux chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
As I said I'm no poet.

Still I liked this, the description was very vivid and you really got the emotional appeal going through the poem.
Aokigahara's Nightmare chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Sorry it took so long for me to review.

I really enjoyed this poem, I love how you used such vivid phrases in it. Definitely a keeper!
SunsetSprite chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Very deep!
For me, it paints a picture of a butterfly trapped inside a jar, only to never be let free. Everyone has this feeling, but that butterfly will be let free, and will be able to do whatever it wants.
Once again, I like it!