|Reviews for battleground|
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
"have you really been waltzing with my despair
through the winter palaces of my heart?
have you really been irrigating the obsidian dust
I had been breathing throughout my life in exile?"
This is so very beautiful! I love the longing and desperation and could hear a voice breaking when this is spoken. Another brilliant piece! I love how you end it "coagulated stardust" lovely imagery!
| Allele chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
At first I thought that this may have been about a person who lost their lover, but toward the end it seemed more like a tired soldier. Good job.