|Reviews for Return To My Haven|
| xxxyx chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
Lol, poor Julius. Brutus's gonna kill him.
Anyway, Julius definitely should be a super hero. Didn't his ill-fated exploits prove that he has some fate-twisting super power? :P Imagine someone with that power, he can do anything and get away with it! XD
Anyway, as entertaining as always. I do hope you continue this little amusing project. :)
| xxxyx chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
'Now that I am a local hero, it makes it more difficult to return to my haven.' - indeed. That's a sharp observation.
Lol, bomb... this guy has the weirdest luck in the universes. If each story is a meal serving, then this story is a delish snack. Quirky.
Anyway, I think your dialogue is better and more natural this time, in this story.
And this time it's Hummingbird.
| xxxyx chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Pfft... attempted rape becomes a joke. Cud-be-better indeed lol.
Not exactly the most original idea, but a novel and amusing one nevertheless. If Katsu says he likes it so far, all the more reason for me to.
Oh, btw, Pigeon, Sparrow, Eagle. The motif is bird names?
Short chapter, btw, but that does not lessen the enjoyment.
| Naver chapter 2 . 6/30/2013
Hm. Why do you have san at the end of the names this time? I just though it was odd as it wasn't in the first chapter. I do love this series anyhow as the names don't matter that much. I can't wait for the next chapter for this! Now I see that Lily is now a reoccurring character. I feel that for some reason she will become like a stalker of some sort, I would love that. Will the policewoman reappear again? I can't wait to see Mr. Eagle in action again! :D
-Can't wait for more!
| Naver chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
This was automatically a favorite for me. That was a great chapter and introduction for this! I really liked the thought of a man doing evil acts becoming a hero over misunderstanding. At first, when I learned that his haven was prison, I was caught off guard. I was thinking of something else entirely but the rest of your words made sense to way he wanted to be there. It's a shame that this will be a side project as I will wait and ponder what will happen to him for days on end.
-Continue to write. :)
| Katsurou Shimizu chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
First rape? Now a saviour of a possible terrorist bomb attack? Very interested to see what you will come up with next.
I'm still reading this with the voice of Rowan Atkinson.
Loving those random symbols which you insert when Sparrow is speaking by the way. Reminded me of those cartoons with those high-pitched sound effects. Very visceral and a nice touch.
*Possible suggestions to improve flow*
[Sparrow-san continues on, my brain is filtering out her words.]
- Sparrow-san continues on, oblivious to my brain filtering out her words.
[I casually walk up to the table the man is sat at]
-I casually walk up to the table where the man is sitting at.
| Katsurou Shimizu chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Hi there from the forums! Just saw your story while browsing through the manga section, and decided to give it a little read.
Suffice to say I didn't regret a single second of it.
Even if the pilot chapter is relatively short, the silly humor interpersed with the matter-of-fact narration (For some reason, I read this with the voice of Rowan Atkinson) works well. And considering that I am a silly person myself, I am more than glad not to take this seriously at all.
Well, I definitely following this. So feel free to throw in as much silliness as you like!