|Reviews for The Lament of the Tablecloth|
| Lauren chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Hello there! :)
Just popping in to leave a review; I think the writing here is a bit rushed and forced. Like, you knew what you wanted to say but you weren't sure how to say it. I think it could be reworked into something nice, give the table cloth more of a personality. People won't care about the story if they don't care about the main character. (Even if said character is a table cloth)
Have a nice day!
| thehopefulone chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
You should add more to this, its interesting to experince how a inanimate object would feel.