|Reviews for A Wallflower No More|
| reejoy chapter 11 . 3/6/2013
So she got closer to Cara and Jeremy?
| myheart4you chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
Ah, the transformation...
Have you mentioned who she likes yet?
Nice chapter :)
| myheart4you chapter 3 . 1/27/2013
Psh, guy troubles. It really is terrible.
So, I guess she really knows how to put herself out there. I'd like to see the transition she made, such as the first day of school when she decided to be different
| myheart4you chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
Ah, all a typical freshmen guy wants is to sleep with someone. Sounds about right, haha :P
I liked this chapter better, and it's good that she lost the weight. She must have been pretty dedicated to lose 11 pounds in what? Two weeks? Or was it summer vacation?
| myheart4you chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
OOOO sounds interesting. I'm curious about the next chapter now. The only critique I have is to not do the obvious self-introduction at the beginning of the chapter. If you want the readers to know what your character is like, work it into the story. Especially the part about her father. When she says, "my parents are divorced. I wish my dad were still around", it makes it sound so emotionless. Like she's just stating facts.
Other than that, this story has potential :)