Reviews for Heart with the silent voice
Desertfyre chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
This invoked some good imagery. I believe that some commas at least could benefit the piece so that the reader will automatically slow down and pause in certain places. It would have more rhythm with some strategically placed commas.

Other than that, this was a very cool piece. :)
SuzyDiego chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
You have beautiful imagery in your poem however it took me a few reads before I began to see how your synopsis related to the material presented. It was a pleasant read.