|Reviews for Nun of That|
| MagicWords chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I really liked this! Throughout the whole thing, I wondered about her reasons up until you revealed them at the end. I'd probably mention the detail that her brother is at the table before the end though. He kind of popped up out of no where, unless you intended for his ignored presence to serve as a symbol for Miranda being so consumed with her own ideas and grief that she did not see him until he knocked some sense into her.
Loved the bit about the sailboat. You led up to that part really well. If I were you, I would add some character descriptions, though. I mean, I feel that Miranda looks completely opposite of a person who would be a nun, but it's tough to tell without any thrown in descriptions. I'd do this for her mother and brother as well. But still, really engaging piece with an interesting ending! I liked it!