Reviews for The Violin
InkIntoLife chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Using my Fictionpress penname because my Fanfiction one WILL NOT FIT. Anyway, this feels a little drabble-ish, but it's really good. But I don't think she shouldn't have thrown the bow and violin in the fire because...well, she ADORED it. Even if it's unacheivable, one does not let go of a dream, or a loved thing, so easily.
-Inky
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Wtf is the cover?
This was an interesting read and an amazing story. Spelling, grammar, and punctuation? Flawless. I love the writing style, too.
on and on chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Et tu, Brutus?
Or, you have just killed me with feels.
Sly murderer.
Anyway. This story was really good, but the concept is only slightly cliched. (In my writing class it's all anyone else writes about.)
But the reason the feels killed me was I was reminded of this Pantene commercial that was less a commercial and more a piece of art.
Still, this was grammatically sound and a good execution.
But...while I'm a fan of flowery language, it just became a bore after a bit. (I'm a hypocrite but what the fuck, eh?)