Reviews for The Mysterious Dark Unknown
angrylove888 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
This beatifully captures the unfairness of life. We are always in fear of a disaster lurking around the corner, and your poem begs the question: why? Why do bad things happen? Is God punishing us? Life, like a candle abruptly snuffed out, does indeed leave an afterglow in the darkness, but it shouldn't have to. A wonderful, ominous piece. I'll be sure to read more.