Reviews for The Keeper's Captive
Fumiki chapter 16 . 8/27/2021
Hi there. It's been a while since I've been on this site, I think the last time I'm here is when I was a teenager. Now, I'm nearing thirty and out of nowhere, I remember your story (The King's Groom, specifically) I'm ashamed to admit that I had no idea about this sequel. Anyways I'm not gonna push you for more chapters, I know sometime stuff happens, and sometimes writers just lost inspiration to continue their story, but I'm here to tell you, THANK YOU for writing. Thank you for bringing joy to me (and to thousand others, I'm sure). In my teenage years, my most delicate phase of life, your story bring me happiness (shamefully, I actually create a Kole and a Marek in my sims once).
Wherever you are today, whatever you're doing, I hope you have a great life. Please take good care of yourself during this pandemic.

Love, Fumiki (damnnn I dropped this name when I reach the 20s. How the time flies)
LadyDe chapter 16 . 9/4/2016
Whoa! The know who Keith was/is? What could they want from him?
R. Ficst chapter 16 . 8/9/2016
Ah! Shocking developments! I look forward to more chapters :)
long time fan chapter 15 . 2/13/2016
Are you not going to update anymore? :( I miss you!
Marie Starr chapter 15 . 11/15/2015
What's going on with Alair? Hopefully nothing too bad happens to him and this doesn't result in a tragedy. Looking forward to the next update!
Marie Starr chapter 14 . 9/4/2015
NO~! Why are you disappearing Alair?! Please update soon so I can find out why! I look forward to the next update and what Keith is going to do. Hopefully things don't end tragically for them.
petrisha.naidoo chapter 14 . 8/31/2015
These two they are so different yet so much alike . They have feelings for each other but doesn't want to confess them . Alair is upset that keith wants too go back home and so he's just ignoring him . Been a long wait lol . But I guess the alcohol got the best of alair he went looking for something and found what he's looking for . Claude and alair's magic is different but they are also restricted far from each other so they don't clash . I hope it was a good idea too go with claude but now I'm wondering about alair . Was the magic too overwhelming for him to handle . Am happy they two finally got together but I hope alair is ok .can't wait for the next chapter .
Nea.M chapter 14 . 8/30/2015
FUUCK! after so long and you leave with cliffhanger?
OMG! please don't disappear so long next time please!
pls chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
Blush chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
I need updates please!
K.T. Tag chapter 13 . 7/28/2015
Thank you for updating!

I don't know if I've ever reviewed or not - it's been awhile. Either way, I'm really excited to see what happens next to Alair and Keith. I really hope they figure their fucking feelings out as well as the machine that keeps the world working - unless that was also fixed. I can't remember...

Anyway, thank you again for updating. I know that life happens and I really love it when you do put in the new chapter. Please continue your hard-work on writing this story! :D
Marie Starr chapter 13 . 6/21/2015
Why is there so much miscommunications between them! Ugh! Please update soon, I look forward to when they 'share' their feelings.
Karunjaal chapter 13 . 6/18/2015
Oh goodie, an update! Man, those two boys need to settle their differences because they went on an adventure together and should be closer. Oh well, I guess these things take time. Also I have no idea why keith wants to go back home when he has all those bills to pay.
Good chapter though, cant wait for more :D
petrisha.naidoo chapter 13 . 6/18/2015
Welcome back .. Oh yeah a new chapter you just put a smile on my dials lol . Keith is soooo stubborn he should just suck it up and tell allair that he wants too stay and stop being like that . Allair should really take a break and think so what if keith is tyree , so what if he's the savior and he lost all his memories because his magic was drained . He is worthy .. He is the one they are so meant for each other the sad part is its taking them this long too see it and admit what's in their heart . Can't wait for the next chapter .
SilverSamurai26 chapter 13 . 6/17/2015
I never liked the name "Claude". Reminds me too much of an evil demon... _ And darn it Keith! Stop being stubborn and just make up (out...) with Alair already! Aiugvkjkutfgm...

But yay! A new chapter! TvT You have no idea how happy I am every time a new chapter is posted. A bit of me is reborn every single time. And that's BEFORE I actually read it. XD I seriously believe that your stories are worth waiting a millennia for. ;) Please keep up the fantastic work. I'll be waiting happily for the next chapter.
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