|Reviews for Lions, Tigers, and Dragons oh my|
| Persevera chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I've said this before in another review-I don't like spell check. Its acceptance of any real word, whether it's in context or not, makes for typos, such as these, which you might want to correct:
[of himself into the center potion
where I part elegantly like a older woman,]-I believe that should be portion.
[you while out indecent inactivity was]-Our(?)
I love the image of a sky bursting into a haunting, burnt-olive color. That's not a color I've ever imagined in the sky but now that you mention it, of course I've seen it before. That's one of the best things a writer can do-point out poetically what should have already been observed.