|Reviews for The Diary Of A Suicidal|
| Anon chapter 3 . 7/9/2013
Good... Good... If you plan on doing another chapter, in italics like for the journal, write. Words. Like. This. But. Instead. Of. A. Choppy. Sentence. Put. The. Emotions. She. Is. Feeling. Like:
"I never got your name" he said. Confusion. Distrust. Blah blah blah(its 4:15 am, dont judge my train of thought!Lol) and such. Just a suggestion, like how people think in real life, but we go through all that in virtually 5 seconds or less, I think, but we never take the time to realize it, right?
| MareBelle chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Maybe you should change the name of your main character, as it is in bad taste to name her after a deceased child and have her suicidal...Great concept, but the name ruins it.