I'm loving the way the plot is unfolding so far! You're doing a great job, and the story is just telling itself now. ;) I think Spirit Warriors just fits better, honestly. Keep up the wonderful job, m'dear!

Please update again soon !

Option one might be better. It will explain to us their powers in details and we would have more time with Cam and Melanie. I liked the chapter even though it wasn't very exciting. Can't wait for the next one

Hope the power doesn't get to their heads or that cam and Sean try to kill each other with their new powers. Anyway good chapter and can't wait for more

Please update soon! I LOVE this fan Fic!

Wow that was a pretty intense chapter with all the imagery there. The details you added really complemented the scenario. Awesome job and keep going but take your time.

Awww I wanted her to be with Sean. But I suppose you did that for a reason that I am soon to find out

It's really sad that you only got 18 reviews because this is a really good story. It reminds me of an actually published book but then I finish the chapter and that reminds me that this is just a story on fictionpress. This story is seriously amazing and deserved more reviews. That's my opinion and I'm only on chapter 13

Fantastic & interesting story so far! I really like it! I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the fabulous awesomeness & please continue immediately, a.s.a.p.! Take care! :)

XXX Tinkies XXX

Great chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Awesome! Btw, you took a long time to write this chapter. But it was mostly worth it. I wanna know what happens between Sean and Cam. Also, I think you should check out a website called .com. It's like this one, but slightly different. You could rewrite this story on there. I would also read it on there. But you should comment in my profile page letting me know this it's up (if you do put it on there). My user is One-Direction-Wolf. And check out these two stories in there: Beaten Up, Broken, But Saved, and Battle of Loyalty, Live, and Life. The first one is what I did and the second one is what my friend did. And please comment on them and 3 them! (That's what you do on thee if you like something. Please and thank you!

Omg y havent u updated

Amazing! Hurry and do the next chapter!

A-Maze-Ing! Hurry and do the next chaper! This my favorite story of all time! You could seriously make this into a real book! That's how good it is! Keep it up!

Sleeping together? Shame shame - and I thought this was T rated ... Lol jk jk, but in all seriousness: yay, Melanie isn't just a rock with no feelings. Sean is like a lovesick puppy in a good way :) cute chapter