Reviews for Not So Picture-Perfect
CassHughes chapter 9 . 7/12/2013
Yet another fabulous chapter. Definitely put a smile on my face (albeit a sleepy one as I'm half asleep as its fairly late- but a smile none the less)

I look forward to seeing what's in store for your lovely characters in the next chapter.
CassHughes chapter 8 . 7/4/2013
Even though this was kinda a filler chapter, I still really liked it :) and I think that deserved a fav and a follow :3
NiallNinjaTurtle chapter 7 . 5/6/2013
This story is awesome. The part in heaven or whatever is hilarious! Please update soon!
MagicWords chapter 6 . 4/2/2013
So I posted a review last night only to find it didn't register because I'd already reviewed this chapter...dumb. FP should let you review as many times as you want...anyway, here I am.

I really liked the opening when they were pulling pranks. Can't wait to see the outcome! Blake is really sweet and the kiss scene was great. Just don't be afraid to take wild chances and explain the reasons why Blake can use google in his head (btw, the authors note was unnecessary because I understood without it).

Glad I could help. Keep writing. Never quit.
MagicWords chapter 6 . 3/24/2013
MagicWords chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
I liked this chapter. I hate it when guys act like bullies towards girls, but Blake came in and knocked them away. He's sweet. Seriously, they are like crazy ten year olds, those two. I keep forgetting he's a robot. I'm sure Jess does, too.

Can't wait for party scenes!
MagicWords chapter 4 . 3/24/2013
You paint very funny, humorous scenes. They are so immature, but so cute.
MagicWords chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
"I'm just glitchy right now." BAHAHA! It's ten in the morning and I haven't had my coffee yet, but you made me laugh out loud. Congrats.

I love how even though he's a robot, he shows human emotions like discomfort. It makes him vulnerable and more likable. But poor Blake. All those girls must be confusing him. The end was sweet though. You mix in bits about Jason very well.

And your writing is very good. Hardly any typos I saw.
MagicWords chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
This was really, really great. Blake is such a sweetheart. I can see where she would be falling for him, even if he's a robot. And the part with the watch, he is so sweet. I wonder if robots are capable of love? And I hope he fits in with his family soon. You have me hooked! I'll read more soon!
MagicWords chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
This is so much more different than anything I have read on this site. So interesting and good. I love your descriptive style. Can't wait to see where this goes. Keep it up!
XFallenAngelXxX chapter 5 . 2/22/2013
Haha! Nice one, Kristine! But really, it's good so far. PM me or email me later if you want more random plot ideas. CX
TheCollector chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Yes! Please continue! The summary drew me in and the story is awesome, I'd love to see where the character of Blake develops to and the complicated relationship between him and Jess.