Reviews for Czech Commandos
Complex Variable chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I think something's gotten into your water supply. XD You seem to be playing the peanut gallery to your own characters now. Gods, what have I done to you?! xD

[SCHUTASTAFFEL-FUCKING-OBERGRUPPENFUHRER-FUCKING-GENERAL DER FUCKING POLIZEI-FUCKING-STELL FUCKING VERTRETENDER FUCKING REICHSPROTEKTOR-FUCKING-REINHARD FUCKING TRISTAN FUCKING EUGEN HEYDRICH
There's no need to bring Jesus into this. In fact, Christianity—] - - - XD

Also, shouldn't it say "FICKEN" instead of "FUCKING"? xD

[Oh my god, WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH THESE PEOPLE? How the fuck do they even communicate?] - - -XD OMG, I CAN'T BREATHE!

[EYE OF THE TIGER PLAYS] - - - 1) YES! 2) I think it needs to be in quotes—["EYE OF THE TIGER" PLAYS]

[you know. Screwing ] - - - period should be a comma.

[They took him to the best hospital in Czech, only 250 metres away.] - - - It should say "best hospital in Bohemia"

[The world is just a barrel-organ which the Lord God turns Himself] - - - There should be a period after "Himself".

[HITLER (OH MY FUCKING GOD HITLER)] - - - CAN'T... BREATHE... AGAIN! XD
[HIMMLER
(wearing 3-D glasses)] - - - *suffocates*

I'm probably going to write one of these, myself. xD