Reviews for Cupid Gave You Glass Eyes
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
This poem really makes me want to fist pump. This is a loud and proud blunt poem that basically says you can't blame me for something you did. Beautiful and powerful imagery and lexis. I like the flow and I really didn't see the issue with "go to speak" I thought it made sense and doesn't sound wrong to me. I love this because it's true love can make people blind and foolish. I do like the line "Everything's my fault." and then how you turn it around and say "No. Not this time." Brilliant and I love the emphasis on this line. Great and brilliant poem as always and very relatable. :)
tolerate chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I liked it on a whole but [Then when you go to speak] sounds a little wrong. 'Go to' doesn't really flow well with 'speak' behind what follows afterwards. It just feels wrong. But anyway, your poem is good and full of emotions. Keep it up!
TheSkyIsBlueForever chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This is strangely powerful. Did you base this around something you've experienced?
Well done anyway .
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This just makes me think.