Reviews for Walking Memories
crywolf-girl23 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
This is good! I liked the way you managed to tell this man's story, covering his whole life with it's major events. And your choice of words to express his emotions, as well as to paint the background of each scene is astonishing.
Although i had to read it a couple of times to get the rhythm. Also I'm not sure if "a broken lens" is grammatical correct.