Reviews for broken-hearted seashells
smokahontas shut down chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Lovely imagery. Please, wherever you may be at this time, do not stop writing. The world needs more writers with beautiful stories.
beautaliton chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
the ending sentence hit me hard. "i think i'll hold her hand." *sobs* really, though, this was amazing. keep writing and never ever stop!
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
ooh i lovelove the title..

last february, i went to the beach with my family.. i really loved it there.. so i can definitely relate to this.. i don't know how to swim so i always reach for my dad's hand every time i felt scared.. and it was loads of fun when it was low tide coz we get to collect seashells..

anyways, sorry for the long rant.. :p i will definitely check out your other poems since i'm adding this on my favorites..

don't ever stop writing.. :)
xxHappyEmoxx chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Wow!
professional griefer chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Wow. I really love the imagery in this, it was definitely gorgeous and poetic, it was rather breathtaking. It's a beautiful moment to write about, and the ending was perfect.
Sorry, I'm just gushing...but I really enjoyed this.
St. Valentine chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This was a very well written piece. Keep writing!
Briony Black chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
The last line in this is really powerful. I understand how you want to be little again, I miss it too :)