Reviews for broken-hearted seashells |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely imagery. Please, wherever you may be at this time, do not stop writing. The world needs more writers with beautiful stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the ending sentence hit me hard. "i think i'll hold her hand." *sobs* really, though, this was amazing. keep writing and never ever stop! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh i lovelove the title.. last february, i went to the beach with my family.. i really loved it there.. so i can definitely relate to this.. i don't know how to swim so i always reach for my dad's hand every time i felt scared.. and it was loads of fun when it was low tide coz we get to collect seashells.. anyways, sorry for the long rant.. :p i will definitely check out your other poems since i'm adding this on my favorites.. don't ever stop writing.. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I really love the imagery in this, it was definitely gorgeous and poetic, it was rather breathtaking. It's a beautiful moment to write about, and the ending was perfect. Sorry, I'm just gushing...but I really enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very well written piece. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last line in this is really powerful. I understand how you want to be little again, I miss it too :) |