Reviews for The Captive Pirate
Guest chapter 10 . 6/21/2020
So disapointed that the doctor isn't a guy
PenMasterEm chapter 27 . 4/1/2015
Hi there! I must say that I'm very happy to have stumbled on this story. It has a lot of potential and I actually did enjoy it. I read your Author's Note in the first chapter and couldn't help but wonder if you had a change of heart about filling the gaps of the story. It was a little choppy, almost like a collection of one-shots that could make a heck of a novel. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask if you would let me write the filler parts. I will not change any of what you have written, I just want to add some smoother transitions, anticipation, suspense, and more distinctive personalities and backgrounds. This is completely up to you but I hope you consider! I love editing more than writing originals and I think your story has the ability to surpass the best of the stuff I've read on this website. PM me if you're interested or not :)
Taraxoxo chapter 27 . 10/19/2014
I really enjoyed this story
alice.d.soler.21 chapter 27 . 1/8/2014
Loved it!
MaharaniMoony chapter 27 . 5/4/2013
I was so upset when I realised I was at the endof your story. I loved it!
Prodigee123 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Guest chapter 27 . 3/15/2013
I love this story! You write very well. Great characters, and a fun plot. Keep up the good work :)
JustAnotherArtist chapter 27 . 3/8/2013
This was really good. Full of deceit and temptation with a nice twist at the end. Oh i can definitely see why you fell in love with Hanson. Keep up the good work!
Joesette chapter 27 . 3/5/2013
I feel like I have read this before, but, I know I haven't. It's just, so, damn familiar! God. This is just going to bug me now. I still loved this story and forever will.
jennielove chapter 27 . 3/4/2013
That was sooo awesome! Just loved it..
jess lurelock chapter 19 . 2/25/2013
Eek such a hot bodice ripper! V good
gigi chapter 27 . 2/16/2013
I've read this in one go:)
It kinda reminded me on a theater play cause it felt like there was some mayor storyline leftouts - I suppose it was deliberate. Like every greedy reader I think it would be even better if chapters were little longer. But all in all I really had fun reading it ;)
Ngoc1231 chapter 27 . 2/10/2013
I kinda really love this story! I also love how he had a hidden title. And I really want to know how Tom became a pirate.

Although you did describe Tom well, I am still would sometime have a different vision of what Tom would look like. But that is mostly in my nature, the author might have set out how a character looks, and I'll make adjustments in my own mind haha.

And the back story behind poor Grace. Omg Henry.. deserves all that he gets and then some.

I was glad though when Letitia got her memories back. I like the spunky version of her, and when she came to find Tom after she found out of Henry lying to her. My favorite scene.

Love the story!
smrae chapter 27 . 2/8/2013
Great ending! Really enjoyed this story and I am sad it's over. Hope to see these characters again in the future.
thecurious chapter 23 . 1/27/2013
I cant wait for more i love this storyy read it all at once
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