Reviews for A Hot Mess
Ashleigh.Chance0 chapter 6 . 1/6/2014
Love the end of this chapter!
Megsi chapter 28 . 1/2/2014
I went away for a while and was so excited when I checked my emails and saw you'd updated a whole bunch of times!
I love this, even if Jaimie and Jax are a bit fucked up at the moment. They have a really nice relationship, for the most part, and what seems like a natural chemistry.
I really want to know who the writer is, I feel like maybe it's a setup by Dom and he's sending the two of them there to sort themselves out. And Gary and Dom... How cute! I was hoping that would happen.
Can't wait for your next update.
naughtyfantasies101 chapter 28 . 1/2/2014
Beautiful beautiful story! Please update soon!
Jester79 chapter 26 . 12/30/2013
Wow - a lot of confessing going on in that book. Sounds like Jaimie is going to do some confessing as well.
Alexis Grace chapter 24 . 12/29/2013
It is unthinkable that you have only 15 comments for this story it is absolutely amazing! I look forward to your updates and love everything about this book! I do think however that the last two chapters would possibly go together if they were just one!

I am absolutely In love with your characters and how real they seem! Please update soon :)

renegade01 chapter 25 . 12/29/2013
Oooh I can't wait to find out what's on that USB stick ;-)
the unknown anon chapter 23 . 12/28/2013
I've just finished reading this. I followed your account a long time ago since you finished 'Offshore' and I never noticed this story until I got the email saying that you updated this 'A Hot Mess'. I checked it and I don't regret a thing! I love this story! I'm in love with Jaimie! I'm in love with Jaimie and Jackson together!

Hope you could update more
renegade01 chapter 22 . 10/27/2013
I don't blame the woman ;-)
renegade01 chapter 21 . 10/26/2013
Awesome story. I hope she makes him work for it ;-)
BleedingInLove chapter 20 . 10/22/2013
Jester79 chapter 20 . 10/22/2013
Lulu's hilarious - everyone needs one of her in their family. It's funny he didn't address the "girlfriend" but, the "complete strangers" in her statement.
BleedingInLove chapter 19 . 10/10/2013
Love the characters! :p
BleedingInLove chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
I love it already :)
violet-eyez chapter 19 . 10/9/2013
lol...can't wait for the next chapter
HappilyEverAfter29 chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
It was practically perfect! I probably found 2 or 3 mistakes out of the whole thing? And it is a wonderful story line! I loved it! Please update soon!
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