Reviews for A Hot Mess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the end of this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo! I went away for a while and was so excited when I checked my emails and saw you'd updated a whole bunch of times! I love this, even if Jaimie and Jax are a bit fucked up at the moment. They have a really nice relationship, for the most part, and what seems like a natural chemistry. I really want to know who the writer is, I feel like maybe it's a setup by Dom and he's sending the two of them there to sort themselves out. And Gary and Dom... How cute! I was hoping that would happen. Can't wait for your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful beautiful story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow - a lot of confessing going on in that book. Sounds like Jaimie is going to do some confessing as well. |
![]() ![]() It is unthinkable that you have only 15 comments for this story it is absolutely amazing! I look forward to your updates and love everything about this book! I do think however that the last two chapters would possibly go together if they were just one! I am absolutely In love with your characters and how real they seem! Please update soon :) Alexis |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh I can't wait to find out what's on that USB stick ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just finished reading this. I followed your account a long time ago since you finished 'Offshore' and I never noticed this story until I got the email saying that you updated this 'A Hot Mess'. I checked it and I don't regret a thing! I love this story! I'm in love with Jaimie! I'm in love with Jaimie and Jackson together! Hope you could update more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't blame the woman ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. I hope she makes him work for it ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lulu's hilarious - everyone needs one of her in their family. It's funny he didn't address the "girlfriend" but, the "complete strangers" in her statement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the characters! :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it already :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol...can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was practically perfect! I probably found 2 or 3 mistakes out of the whole thing? And it is a wonderful story line! I loved it! Please update soon! |