|Reviews for kissing in public|
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
"lately all we seem to do is/fight & sleep & peel each other's/clothes off to keep ourselves/from falling apart."
This is very well written, and I can definitely relate. The honesty and the conflicting emotions show so much insight into the people in the relationship.
| electrical moon chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Great poem. I love the line 'this half-love isn't enough for me.'