Reviews for The Genesis
cassiealan34 chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
Lovely
DuchessYappingDog chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
Woo woo looking forward to the future adventures of Jake and Hannah! Hopefully they have a super dramatic and ... sexy... time at the beach. :D
nekoriel chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
You left me seriously hanging. I read The Apocalypse in one sitting and I was positively beaming that Jake and Hannah finally got together. But then it was cut short on 20th chapter I think? Then this Sequel. And they broke up (Metamorphosis one-shot) and I'm positively controlling my urge to throw a childish temper because well they broke up! But it's completely understandable considering the circumstances they were under. Honestly tho, I can't wait till they kiss and make up. Whether it's going to be easy or not (I think 'not') it's going to be worth it.

I really like how you write. Your characters have this uniqueness in them that makes them hard to forget. I mean, they are their own person. Realistic, you can say. I can go on and on talking about how I like TA and The Genesis. So please, wherever you are right now, I hope you'll be facing a screen soon with your hands on the keyboard and the Status of TG would read Recently Updated. I mean like, this May.

So okay, I'm so glad I decided to open my FP account after so many years. And I'm never been happier in my FP days that I came across this wonderful story. So please, like the rest of people who like TG, may your personal mug of creative juice be filled to the brim. And make us fair people off TG Fan Community (I think flattery will get us people somewhere lol) super happy.

Last thought. I don't like the fact that Avalon cheated on Isaac. Do you know how much I hate infidelity? It's the worse sin one could commit when one is in a relationship. Gosh, my blood boils literally whenever I hear, read, see a person cheating. My heart literally just breaks.

Anyway. My summer will end in 28 days. So well hopefully I can party it up by spending another day cooped in this small spot in my house reading your TG update. Hopefully. Soon. Yes. Yes. Okay.

I don't know how to end this. I voted on your poll. First choice because I am channeling my inner shrink. You wouldn't suggest the Song Title if you didn't like or was actually secretly rooting for it. Okay. I'm being presumptuous but wth.

Gosh I'm actually fangirling in my own way right now. If it isn't obvious enough.

Well then, dear writer, have an awesome day ahead.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
wow i cant believe they broke up! It is quite depressing actually I mean they went through all this crap to be together and now they just brake up because of that! I am going to killmyself! But don't get me wrong I love it. I have just been in my room reading the first book tearing my hair out because both of them are so blind then they finally get together and I thought it would just be happy ever aftar but noooo they just had to be all pridefull and angry. but yeah i love it i mean what is a good love story without drama .
Guest chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
please please post more I am dieing to know what happens i love the storyline and you are a great writer also Hanna and jake are so cute!
foxyricanlady chapter 2 . 3/16/2013
I love this story you are an amazing writer. Please update soon...
Nyancat chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
This is kinda weird, I barely remember the people from the Apocalypse, other than that I think that you are doing pretty good and I hope a new chapter will be up soon!
Nocturnal-Silver-Wolf chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
Hmmm... I don't get why they broke up because of such trivial things, but okay, whatever :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Update! Pleaaaaaassee!
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
Ooh, I'm excited for this story. They need to get together again. The awkward silence is so not interesing. I kind of wish they were fighting instead. It would have been more interesting. And they probably would have a lot of sexual tension built up. Sexual tension always makes thing interesting. :)

But anyway, I'm exited to see where this goes!
OrangeSodaRocks chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
awww I love Isaac still like crazy. how do you always create the most loveable, unforgettable characters? Im so glad that Jake and Hannah are going to try to be friends but I hope it's just trying...they're meant to be lovers! ;)
LondonLi chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Excellent choice for a chapter title! Thanks for the update!
ForgottenHope chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
I miss Jake and Hannah! I'm so excited to find out what happens next! It's already off to a great start. Well, not for their relationship. They're bound to blow up on each other at some point. But for the story! I can't wait to see what happens next! You're a great writer. Keep it up :)
brinalovesyouxx chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
So much tension in that car... But they've started talking normally-ish.. :) keep up the awesome work :D xx
insomniatic reader chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
Even in awkwardness these two have chemistry! Great chapter! I want more soon :)
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