|Reviews for Determination|
| ELECTRICEEL chapter 10 . 5/5/2015
I LOVE IT! OMG OMG OMG! THIS IS AWESOME!
| sleepyreader chapter 9 . 2/26/2013
Your story has mpreg? Yay. I'm looking forward to that chapter :D
| Fragile Daydreamer chapter 8 . 2/18/2013
You rock. Loving the story so far. Chapter eight's a bit short, though.
and I spotted a little error back when Roan was waiting for Esca to hop on, something about not understanding. I'll let you find it.
anyway, keep it up! :D
| Lulu the Llama chapter 6 . 2/13/2013
Cute story! There is lacking development, but it's a good feel story so I don't mind so much!
| Bluntlyhonest chapter 3 . 2/13/2013
This story is well written, however I find that it is moving entirely too fast. Even though it's only the 3rd chapter, they are already consenting to be one anothers mates. There could have been some hesitation on Escas part since he is just now meeting this man, but maybe your intention is to have one of those "love at first sight" relationships. Although im not exactly sure what your motives may be for this story, it is extremley well written.
| Sayure chapter 4 . 2/12/2013
You totally should update soon. I'm impatient to read what'll happen next.
| Sayure chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
I truly loved this chapter :-)
| Sayure chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Ohhh! Nice first chapter. I already like the story. Good job.
| Nevermore23 chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Awwwww Love at first sight!
| Nevermore23 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
awesome Update soon!