Reviews for Arëth
A Fangirl chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Fantasy isn't usually my thing, but I'll keep reading this one! It looks pretty interesting!

One thing I noticed, though, is that the dialogue seems kind of unnatural in places, mainly near the end I think. Wish I could give a more in-depth critique but...

anyway. Please update soon! I'm looking forward to it!