|Reviews for The Hunted Child Jacob Braché series|
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/18/2013
Great chapter I was holding my breath for jacob
| rubyblue100 chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Great start and yay there is more.:)
| chibilover28 chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
This is a really great start. The way it's written makes me want to write it more although I wish that you could have given it more depth. Keep up the good work! :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
when yer write book i will buy a copy of EVERY book yer write and this is fantastic with the descriptive scene like yer even there and can't wait fer the next chapter.
| OrangeyApples chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
I like the actual FIRST chapter too. Though it's the same thing - you might wanna check your grammar. A little more in-depth wouldn't hurt either. Keep up the good work!
| OrangeyApples chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Nice first chapter! A few grammatical errors, could use a little more meat, but I like it!