Reviews for Emilies
TanteLiz chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Deeelicious! Wow - real writing? On FictionPress? I hope you've submitted this somewhere; it would be great for Asimov's, or one of the other S/F short story mags. It has the feel of mid-century to 70s S/F - something you'd have found in Harlan Ellison's Dangerous Visions collections, if you remember those.
Doc in Oz chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Quite enjoyable. A longer, multi chapter version of this would work nicely. you have a nice writing style that keeps it simple, and yet, not abrupt.