Reviews for When it Rains, it Pours
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Hey :)
So I would recommend separating your authors note from the beginning of the chapter with a line or something, because without it it's a little confusing. If also suggest using the word version of numbers instead of 4, write four, up until the teens. It looks more clean cut. Other than that, interesting start! I'd love to read more :)