Reviews for Madness
jesusfreakauthorgirl17 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I love the haiku in the middle! I'd say make it more organized, but sometimes poetry needs to be crazy. :P
The Loved And Unloved chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
It's okay bro, you're not alone(: Again, another awesome poem!


- Aka The Loved And Unloved
Mending the Sky chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I really liked the fractured style here. The changes between the stanzas were very interesting. When you write, it seems to come from a deep, emotional place, and that's very refreshing. :)
Jeremiah Cecil chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Crazy is as Crazy does. Problem?

I like the use of different poetic structures within the piece as a whole. It's jarring, but in an aptly fitting way. (hey, it's craaayzey, right?)

Uplifting review, meet depressing poem. Poem, review. Right? I dunno. It seems out-of-place to do so, but I liked the poem more the more of it I read. (The start felt weak, but I don't know why, sorry!)

And my usual caveat: "How do you know it's not just hormones and fleeting infatuation?
Cain101595 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
This is amazing, I can feel the pain and sorrow, and it's simply amazing how you were able to create this. I sincerely hope you heal one day, until then, I can only say I'm sorry you must go through such things :/