Reviews for Laying Under The Ash
ygg chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Wow very dark and hauntingly terrifying! As the point of no return has finally been crossed. I really like the "people crumble under the gaze of man" which seemingly makes the distinction of our individual and collective actions. Great work! Keep writing :D
Key Atlas chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Great poem! I love it!