Reviews for Hell to Pay
Zonex Krypton chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Hmmm... It sounds very unsettling indeed. She cheated on him huh, assuming his lover is a woman and he's a heterosexual...? Oh well, I like the last line and the fact that we're merely observers.
deadaccount756795 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Love it!
No Name and the Lonely Machine chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I never pegged you as a poet...but with this and your other one, you're really good. I mean like REALLY good at this. 'There'll be hell to pay'. I love the ending! Nicely done!