|Reviews for John|
| jakbnimble chapter 9 . 2/9
This chapter had my heart racing! There'll be no questioning John's loyalty from now on, that's for sure. :)
| Bastard From North chapter 9 . 2/3
Hahah! That was great one :D It sure is good to have police as a brother :P
This sure is one interesting peace of art :D I never even though idea like this so it must be unique. Really good work with this :)
| MysteriousFire chapter 8 . 12/28/2013
This story is somehow very vague and at the same time very clear xD I get what you're writing but I'm wondering where you're getting at...
Of course he picks Brittney over Sean. I mean, he wants to get to know her. Maybe she'll finally start acting nice to him now.
Awkward conversation with Soul... poor John, I hate awkward conversations.
| jakbnimble chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
Hope you're able to continue writing! I can't wait to see these guys embark on art adventure. :)
| jakbnimble chapter 7 . 11/18/2013
Poor John. Bit of a messed up home life. :( Almost seems like he needs to be a part of something like the Worms just for some self-expression. I hope things get better for him!
| jakbnimble chapter 6 . 11/18/2013
Your description in this chapter was nicely done. I love the Statue of Liberty piece/message.
Looking forward to seeing more of the gang and Worm too! It sounds like he'll have an interesting story to tell. :)
| jakbnimble chapter 5 . 11/17/2013
"Meeting" Carsten was interesting and unexpected, and seeing him really explains more about John.
Wondering if this Worm is the one who started the underground movement...
| jakbnimble chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
Soul and Brittney both seem pretty mysterious...
| jakbnimble chapter 3 . 10/24/2013
Secrets, yay! Things are heating up! I think I'll like Taylor.
| jakbnimble chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
Interesting start! I like the idea of underground artists. The characters' personalities are already starting to show, which is nice; great how realistic and unique they are. :)
| fantasybookworm2012 chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Good job. I liked this. An I have an oppinion about arts but I'm nkt gonna say it in public display.
| MysteriousFire chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
"You cooled down for six hours? That must have been some heat." I like his sarcasm xD
Ride llamas? Cool!
I really have no idea of what to think of this scene... I kinda like Max here, but everything is so weird and feels wrong... Just update soon so I know what to make of this!
| MysteriousFire chapter 6 . 8/26/2013
I love the Worms!
I'm wondering... who is the big Worm inspired on? I once saw something about a streetartist working all over the world, I'm wondering if he's the same one you based Worm on.
I have come to like Johns personality too. Unlike Max or Jepson he's shy and actually thinks!
It's strange how they just pushed him out like that, but I don't think Sarah's one of the easiest persons to get along with...
Max! I'm not sure if I should be glad that he's the one who's awake (and not John's father) or wondering what he's doing out of bed at that hour...
| MysteriousFire chapter 5 . 7/19/2013
"For the first time in my life I can go and do what I want." that just sounds sad.
Imaginary friends? John keeps getting better!
He drew the cover photo! Somehow I can completely imagine that being John's brother, but then he would have recognised him. I have a feeling though he's gonna find Max somewhere out there...
Is he the one the Worms named themselves after?
| MysteriousFire chapter 4 . 7/19/2013
I still love Anna speaking her mind and fighting with John, Melody's orange hair and Soul
Locker number 130? So there is a meaning behind the numbers in your penname?
I'm still wondering how Soul knew his combination though...
Why doesn't Brittney show up? That's not nice of her :( But she's his lab partner for the entire semester so he has enough time with her left.