Reviews for Tainted Crown
Guest 1- Grace chapter 9 . 8/10
Stupid Jupiter, Foolish Jupiter, Crazy Jupiter. He Should Have Shown His True Colour Like Dommiel And Chalix. I Hope He Will Regret Raping His Wife. Thank You For Showing Another Reason For Chalix's Hatred To Merridy. There Was Nothing Much About Merridy And Dommiel In This Chapter. Please Update Soon.
HPuni101 chapter 9 . 8/9
And the plot thickens ... can't wait to read more! Happy writing.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/31
Please update?
Guest 1- Grace chapter 8 . 7/9
What! Deliana Is A Spy? OMG I Think Merridy Is Getting Attached To Her Unborn Son. This Is A Nice Update.
PurpleFairy11 chapter 8 . 7/8
this is really good please keep up the great work
Megushie chapter 8 . 7/8
So happy to see a new chapter! I love your writing and hope to continue reading it :)
HPuni101 chapter 8 . 7/8
A brilliantly written chapter as always. Excited to read more. Jupiter has become a very intriguing character and I wouldn't be surprised if he did murder Merridy's father. I hope that Lady Lorna, Chalix and Dommiel all get what they deserve in the end after what they've done. Please let Merridy at least have a brief taste of freedom by running away. She may be found and forced to go back but she deserves a moment of peace. But at least she's managed to slap the jerk a few times, if only she could do the same to Chalix.

Thank you so much for updating earlier than planned. Will keep an eye out for the next chapter. Please update soon. Happy writing.
Guest 1- Grace chapter 7 . 7/4
According To The Last Comments Reviewed On This Fantastic Story, I Saw Comment Based On Chapter Twenty Three, Twenty Two And So On. Has This Story Been Before And Later Deleted?
Guest 1- Grace chapter 7 . 7/4
Guest chapter 3 . 7/3
Please please please please please review. I'm so excited that i can't wait for chapter eight.
Guest 1- Grace chapter 7 . 6/20
I Think Jupiter Killed Merridy's Father. Merridy's Future As A Queen Should Signify Dommiel's Position As A King. I Hope Farlan Won't Die Cause He's Too Nice To Die. Please Update Soon.
Guest 1- Grace chapter 7 . 6/20
I Think Jupiter Killed Merridy's Father. Merridy's Future As A Queen Should Signify Dommiel's Position As A King. I Hope Farlan Won't Die Cause He's To Nice To Die.
HPuni101 chapter 7 . 6/20
Thank you so much for this wonderful update (I was constantly checking). I love your story so much and the direction that it's heading in. Excited to read the impending drama. The way you introduced Merridy's pregnancy was done really well. I'd love it if she became Queen but not with Dommiel as King as he would more than likely end up a tyrant. It would also be interesting if she somehow managed to runaway from him as well in an effort to protect herself and her child.

The best of luck in your endeavor to get this story published, it is definitely unique and professionally written. If I ever see it on the shelves, I will definitely buy a copy. Don't give up.

Please update again soon. Need to know what happens next. All the best and happy writing.
BritBookWorm chapter 7 . 6/19
Another amazing chapter! Nice introduction to the pregnancy, Merridy's emotions were well written and very believable. I'm interested in whether or not the opium will come back later, I don't remember it in the original but you did say there would be changes so never know. My favourite part has to be the card scene, I was wondering when you would write in the extract. The (hopefully) foreshadowing of 'You will be Queen.' is killing me, when will it happen? Why does it happen? Damn it! I want Merridy to be queen but then Farlan would have to die and Dommiel would rule with her. Or will he? I'm hooked and, as always, eagerly await the next chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14
updaaaaate please
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