|Reviews for Alexis|
| Ivory Meadows chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
This is a really good start and I definitely think it would be better if you continued it, I think you could do well with turning this into a longer story. As a stand alone piece it's good, but it's got so much in it that could be extended to make a decent book, and it would be a shame if you didn't. But in the end it does come down to what you think of it and what you want it to be. x
| moonlightstay chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
so sad, please continue!
| The Loved And Unloved chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
It's good, but I feel like you gave too much information away all at once. You should ease into all the different aspects and concepts. And add a little more of a structure.
Again, not trying to be rude, just helpful advice..?
- Aka The Loved And Unloved