Reviews for Everybody Leaves
Ashton Brooke chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I feel almost like you're Lindsay at this moment... I don't know what you're actually going through but I'm going to address this like you were her.

First thing - are you pushing people away? I promised Lindsay I would be her friend forever, but what can I do when she doesn't talk to me for weeks at a time just because I'm better at Color Guard? What can I do when she doesn't respond when I talk to her just because I've found Jesus and I wanted to talk to her about Him? What can I do when everything she does is screaming in my face "GO AWAY!"? I'm not a very assertive person, so what can I possibly do when I talk to her and she ignores me for days on end? How else I am supposed to respond when she does this to me for days and weeks at a time for 2 years and I've never done anything like it to her? How else can I respond besides taking a hint and leaving?

Again, I don't know if you're pushing people away but, if you are, that is probably how the other is feeling.

Btw, did you read the chapter?
Freiheit98 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
It's really sad. But beautifully written. Good work, keep it up! :D