|Reviews for SHOCK|
| amberbabygirl chapter 11 . 4/16/2013
I honestly love this story. The minor mistakes honestly don't bother me to much because everyone makes mistakes. I have been reading this over the past few days, and most of the time I find it hard to put my phone or laptop down. I really like this and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Jason Bloom chapter 11 . 4/11/2013
Nice, though some tense errors and obvious autocorrect derps (warm arm hit my face?). Always proofread. Oh, and please update more often?
| Jason Bloom chapter 10 . 2/4/2013
YES! CONTINUE! I wants MORE!
| Jason Bloom chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Minus a few grammar and spelling mistakes. One thing that might make the story a bit better would be to maintain a constant tense, past or present. Overall, well written, good storyline, I like it. Keep writing!
| Jason Bloom chapter 9 . 1/31/2013
Well written, m