Interesting concept. I think it is quite realistic as far as Cassie is concerned, you've chosen her to be quite ignorant of what is ahead of her, dismissing it as something that will be easy to deal with. I should think that there are a lot of teens out there with exactly that erroneous attitude. I like your writing so far, interested to see how it pans out.

What a beautiful chapter. I truly loved this one. I know I say that all the time, but still.
Having Cassie's mother come was so enlightening. Cassie's worry to be recognized was truly something relatable, and having her mother not recognize her was perfect. Honestly, I was worried it'd be a cliché thing where her mother would recognize her.
I love how Cassie was learning how to become a mother. That was such a great thing to add, mainly because I was wondering as to what kind of a mother Cassie could be.
I still am going to keep reiterating how much I love this story, just so you get the idea. ;)

-bs13 out-
"But you're just a boy; you don't understand, yeah you don't understand how it feels to love a girl someday, you'll wish you were a better man, you don't listen to her, you don't care how it hurts, until you lose the one you wanted cause you've taken her for granted, and everything you have got destroyed..."

Baby practice! :)

Her mother! And she doesn't even know her daughter. How sad. But glad Cassie's getting some practice with babies, after all, she is going to be a mom. :)

Another awesome chapter.
It's good to see she finds babies cute, and now knows how to look after one.

First off, I can see the line breaks, so you're good. ;)

I wish the scene with Cass's mum were longer. It would have been nice for a bit more drama. But alas, you're the writer, and not I...

Seth is actually really precious. Also, I'm glad Cassie's keeping the babies. :)

Please post again soooon.

omg im not logged in but this is the best ever. and yeah I found that scene like WAY to breif. maybe lillian should come in again and get something, idk, just a thought, but really I would've liked some kind of talking even if it ended horrbily. oh and the whole mom and daughter meets scene reminded me of a movie called October baby, have you seen it, its super sad. anyway i hope this wasn't too confusing i know my reviews are pretty scattered.

Hah! Classic baby humour and stuff, very funny, but kinda sweet too knowing that Cassie now knows a few new things XD Keep up the good work!

I was thinking "Why should I forget...Oh." when you mentioned the name thing.

I think it would've been a bit more traumatic if her mother remembered her. It would've been mindblowing if she did O.o;

I wonder how Dad will react when he finds out his ex met their daughter for the first time in ages?

Cute chapter, update soon

Wait, why was her mom wearing a name tag?

Also I love the way Seth and Cassie interact with each other. I hope they end up being together for real. (Or are they already together for real? Maybe I missed that?)

Anywho yay for updates!

Cass should have a confrontation with her mother in a later chapter. It'd be kinda interesting to see that.

Can't wait for more please update soon

I was about to click the next button when I realized. . . there is no next button! Ah :(

This story is really good and I love the plot! I don't know what you were talking about earlier about characters because they are all very well-rounded from what I can see.

The only things I noticed were small typos and tiny holes in a couple of minor details. But Other than that this is great and I really hope you update soon!

I KNEW SHE WAS GOING TO BE A BITCH I JUST KNEW IT. AH.